Key corrections
“You might step into the shower every morning”
Better: “You might shower every morning” or “You might step into the shower each morning.”
“scientific evidence supporting one type of shower over the other”
Better: “scientific evidence supporting showering in the morning over showering at night, or vice versa” (clearer).
“showering in the morning sends this residue…”
Original:
showering in the morning sends this residue that you might have picked up overnight down the drain.
Better:
Showering in the morning washes away the sweat, skin cells, and oils that accumulate overnight.
“Your skin picks up bacteria and grime whenever it comes in contact with something or someone.”
Better:
Your skin accumulates bacteria, sweat, and grime throughout the day.
“stops this gunk”
Better:
removes this buildup or washes away this dirt, since “gunk” is informal.
Comparison table
“clean start to your day”
Better:
Start the day feeling clean…
